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Words that burn skin away like ashes,
Falling, crumbling, bleeding,
The broken glass of a shattered heart,
Let's leave the pieces where they lay…

The strength of a drum; bang, bang,
The softly pounding heart,
The tears that crash like waves,
The screams that pierce the silence…

Perfection is unattainable,
Life is death-defying,
Flaws are happiness,
Mistakes are to be seen…
I'm okay. Just stressed.
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PaladinEclipse Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very powerful. I love the details that made connect to nature, that was a great choice for visualization. Good job! :D
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VampiricBountyHunter Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :)
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:iconpaladineclipse:
PaladinEclipse Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :)
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popov89 Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Reminds me of Senses Fail's last album. Failing is how humans learn, after all.
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VampiricBountyHunter Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love them, and yeah, it is. :)
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:iconsunhoney:
This really fits my frame of mind at the moment, & it's wonderful imagery!
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VampiricBountyHunter Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
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:iconstoryweaver29:
I could really visualize this, good description.
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VampiricBountyHunter Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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